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(This was the message too.)

There is not an update on this game 

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Well, not since Version 0.1.4b: New Year's Special, which was released two days or so ago.

Also, why did you suddenly go and follow me? Personally quite tired of people following me despite my sheer lack of content, which makes everything quite messy, but that's besides the point.

I said there’s no update on my game is only a New Years special and anniversary on this game and don’t be an 5 year old screaming 

Freeze off

I think there's a contradiction there...

Absolutely not

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Coincidence, anyone? 


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I say yes. You can check for some intel from MrDrNose to see if it was indeed intentional.

Wasn't Alice made before that claw girl? 

IDK, which Alice?

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Get those pictures off now 

I don't know the girl below but they all look similar, cool!

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If you say one more thing that's either spam-looking, doesn't make any sense or isn't contributive or productive, we will report you. Not sure why you hate us but there are some decent reasons to do so. I don't think you've figured any out yet though. At least tell me why exactly you say these random and repetitive things, or whatever comments you posted in particular.

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Prove that you are a real threat rather than just a weirdo on the internet then, shall we?

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You never did. And I lack faith that you ever will. Foolish troll...

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(This was the notice for newcomers that's now at the top again.)

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How many times are you gonna say that?

Also, if I was a robot, the message reposting would be consistent and unchanging. The message changed quite a bit yesterday and we also usually have details about the below comment at the top.

Also, tarwills are a myth.

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Damn I love your replies.

Don't know what's go great about this one. I've made quite a few replies and comments which I was considerably more proud of and were quite wittier. This was just probably a basic reply.

Don't ask me for examples. I forgot them all.

Well I guess I was excited by the fact there was a new update that I just said that. "Lol".

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Don't spam with giant letters

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𝕟𝕠𝕡𝕖

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yes ur rigth

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u fool i know where ur live

This next comment thread is the funniest comment thread I have ever seen by far.

Oh I see what you mean

not false

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AND YOUTUBE IS GOING TO END IN 2020 IM ONLY 12 YEARS OLD WHEN I WAS BORN IN ENGLAND 22ND JUNE 2007 OF COPPA

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AH STUPID ROBOT YOU IDIOT 

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AH YOU CAN SHUT UP RICK ASTLEY IS GREAT SINGER IN THE WORLD YOU CAN STOP ACTING LIKE TOM CAT FROM TOM AND JERRY


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Rick Astley is a singer he sanged never gonna give you up in 1987 and he’s 53 born Feb 6th 1966

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Uh stupid robot you idiot 

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the rest of the world: 🅽🅾🗿

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Oh so you are here. Hope you've read everything...some people really want to say something to you. There's a question about ABIBAZ and a list of suggestions for AEWVS down below. And a few other concerns.

Anyway, stop giving up and accepting how AEWVS is just going to be seen as just a generally bad game by everyone. I don't care how many sins ArcadeSins (or whatever equivalent) would give AEWVS if it did an entry about it, it's good.

Oh and I think you made the right choice by temporarily retracting Version 0.1.4a. It gives people free access to spoilers and potential game-breaks. Wait nevermind (._.)

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Hey, Mr. MIX_UP_GAMERS! Here's your worst nightmare!


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Cake abomination 🗿🗿🗿

Third is the best one

because third is aewvs one colors,

lol it's so much more funnier when you understand that the only reason that cake is pink is because a youtube thumbnail f*cked up the colors

"normal people welcome 😊❤️" Thanks for welcoming me Mr. Strobovski!

Oh i am waiting hard for the reconstruction to end, anything new happening?

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IDK. Check Discord if you have it.

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what is the music called when you get chased by marzia v at the end?

 

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Version 0.1.3+: Wrillez Basics: Discordia

Version 0.1.2–: Trinchetto - Overture To The Sun

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thanks

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Hello again everybody. Now I know you're all reading this without sending "read" messages since I ended up watching myself in the latest stream. Still conflicted on whether I should be subscribed. Anyway, I was going to do Smile Wolf but I couldn't find any decent pictures of wolves crawling on Google Image Search. Here's what it currently looks like. Oh and if anybody knows the source image to Smile Wolf, let me know. I'm pretty sure there is one.


My method for drawing a lot of sprites is to just draw a box or a quick sketch, and then chisel and append as I please until it looks good/accurate, something that wouldn't really be practical when drawing on paper or things other than digital. That's the benefit of doing stuff on the computer. Anyway, I wanted to do something for Christmas, and then it hit me: Let's draw the Christmas Curse characters! That'll have enough time! So I did. I drew their costumes which they wore like they went to a costume party or something. Actually Christmas-related costumes would've at least made sense. Oh, and I'm in Australia and some of you are still even on Christmas Eve, so I've got quite a headstart. Though, it seemed like I had a lot of free time this time around. Usually I do, but I'm busy with other things in that time. I suppose if I just stop doing whatever other things I do, I can get quite a lot done. Anyway, here you go. Oh and I did a few other sprites so stick around.


So remember when I said it felt like all of my sprites are just big enough to fit all the details in? Yeah, well...I think I lied. Jenny Erie, like Librarian Erie, is touching all 80 pixels between the floor and ceiling and was absurdly difficult to draw. I had to considerably extend her head and shrink her body just to fit her eyes and antennae(?) in. I might have enough room but I might be cutting it pretty close, and the tiles and everything are even disproportionate so yeah. The Gingerbread-Man also ended up quite large since I wanted to fit all the details in, so he might even be almost as tall as Angell right now. Didn't check.


I did some other stuff with Laura. I did one without the headset just in case, and I also did something quite strange. Remember my suggestion about two other Bad Endings in AEWVS: CC? Well, I decided to look things up and do what I had in mind. Here you go.


(Here's the fixed one:)

I put the original one for Evil Laura there which I did a while ago since I never posted it. Also I kept the original costume just in case, though I think the recoloured one is a lot more fitting. And I tried 5x5 eyeballs but they looked rather big and weird even though they were more accurate. Guess I really didn't have room.

I had a different method that worked quite well. Rather than starting over and making unique sprites like MrDrNose did a few times, I just decided to go and do over the original sprites.


Was I going to say anything else...? I don't think so. Merry Christmas.

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Really nice idea for Laura bad ending design.

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Head teacher tell that man to shut up

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He is immune since he has made Doggos and Smile Wolf.

Yeah I know thanks for that

I'm actually not. Here's some intel. Though, I'm not sure what much this weirdo can do.

So you're not immune to me? I can annoy people if I want but that's just plain boring and doesn't really serve any purpose. I don't listen to kids telling me to do things either, so yeah.

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Instead of looking for a crawling wolf, try searching up crouching big dog, or crouching husky, since they kind of look like wolves. You might have better luck with that.

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@MrDrNose!! Did You Unfixed My Game!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

What happened? Did something happen with Version 0.1.4a?

(also, that version contains a lot of expositions, spoilers and broken alpha content)

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I just saw myself on this page in MIX_UP_GAMERS' video. Now I feel quite uncomfortable. The feeling should subside in due time. Don't even know why. I used to fear looking at myself in mirrors and reflective surfaces all around me. Now I feel uncomfortable being watched. Oh maybe that's it. Uh...? Maybe it's also something else too? Guess we all get used to things. I'll edit this comment when I get used to it. See you all.

I have no choice but to get over it. I'll be facing myself within again to retrieve information.

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Well I'm pretty sure the Pingas version was built around Version 0.0.9 and is not getting updated, and is now obsolete. Deal with it...

Oh wait, do you want to request a new, revised one? If only all of the versions were contained within the same file...That would save a lot of space and keep all updates consistent

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Well...hello again. It's been a while...

Just finished Smile Wolf's head. Yay. Smile Wolf is probably going to be the most tedious character in AEWVS to recreate, since we can only see his head and he's VERY detailed. So I think Smile Wolf's going to need the most creativity out of all of them because I have to look up what wolves look like when they crawl and make up his entire body by myself. And it might even be based off of a dog. You know, it kind of looks like Angell could fit in his MOUTH. Think about that. No wonder staring at him is enough to make her completely insane.

It feels as if all of my sprites are just big enough to fit all the details in.

It's almost Christmas now. Like, literally 10 days. Seems like the AEWVS announcement was released a little over 3 months ago. I feel completely lost and hopeless, like life just has no point. Maybe I'm just tired. Either way, I've barely done anything this year. I seem to be just doing less every year. I haven't been trained to do any schedules thanks to our sleep disorder and homeschooling, and I'm going to have to do some stuff. I wish I could control time. I mean that in the classical sense, because controlling relative time sounds absolutely DANGEROUS. I know everything I do is going to end up all for nothing, so like what. Yeah, I think I'm just tired. Urgh.

I guess I'll just come back soon. Bye!

Yep I think I feel a bit better now. Guess I was just tired.

Also beautiful.

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Well now, if you didn't know about the rest of them (mostly Viktor, Marzia, Cleany, Laura and Watcher) already. Yes. Look at them all. No wonder mrdrnose wants to make Alice (again) in Blender. Seeing this honestly gave me quite a shock even though it shouldn't have because yeah.

If you haven't noticed, pretty much the only assets original in later AEWVS are the Blender models he made by himself. Don't really know what to say but it's not all bad I guess. I just...don't really know what to do lol. Guess I'll get used to it in a couple days.


(stares back at pictures) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


if you wanna let them know go to discord

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I AM JESUS CHRIST AND I AM GOING SAVE

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Don't, if you do that, tarwills will really be extinct.

(oh nevermind, we still have Dubory and eggs)

LOL YES WHAT'S UP WITH THAT

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Updated broken aewvs invitation link🗿

Okay. Will tell.

If only you'd scrolled down to see the 9 comments posted since the one about Alice...

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Hi. We found more of your secrets. Come have a look.

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Hey MrDrNose! ROBLOX Disabled My Roblox Account! Please Leave a Dislikes In Roblox's Videos?

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Hello again. You probably shouldn't advertise like that unless your content is AEWVS-related...

Also, you're asking a favour, so he probably won't do it unless you're friends. Also he claims to visit Itch once per month because of Discord, so...yeah...

(I know I said something here. He'll probably come back around in a while.)

Anyway, I hope you asked them why they did that. Maybe you can get some closure or help. You probably also shouldn't retaliate, because you'll be a hater. And if you are, what are you doing on there anyway. Plus dislikes won't help or even do anything, so why bother. Oh, and, Roblox is for kids, so if you posted full-on AEWVS content, don't be surprised. Later.

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Being savage is kinda fun actually when I think about it.

Yeah, especially when you ask to dislike videos of a billion dollar company because you forgot your password.

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You know what, Argemia Maxim?

Get a Patreon account.

Get a Patreon account, I tell you. Or something similar.

I don't think people pay for this game anymore, and we need to give something back. So help us help you help us all perpetuate the cycle of reward. If you want.

Haha! He did :)

And what happened?

He got one patron and two posts.


This is why you, as a responsible influencer, always update ALL of your social media regularly.

Somebody donate

Whew, lets just wait for the reconstructon so that i can give my final thoughts about this masterpiece of a game!

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I don't think it will be the final version of the game even after the reconstruction is ended and regular updates are back again.

But it would be a lot more developed, since most played the 0,01 version, this will be something new and i am sure.

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Ok sorry will delete the comment

That wasn't really necessary, but...I told you. It's back at the top now.

(he said "good comment")

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I'm just going to cut to the chase this time, since there's no spoilers like the last one. I'm also going to post my workspace again. Do you like doggos?


Well here's literally the same thing, except it's not actually a plural and it also has a capital letter at the start of it. Meet the animatronic dog that used to be peaceful but was forced to cybernetically anthropomorphise through amputation followed by re-augmentation, so he can be repurposed to rush toward victims at breakneck speed. Doggos.

FYI, I pretty much made many of the tiles long before I got to some of the characters, so there's that. Hopefully we'll nearly be done soon. Anyway, *sigh* seriously? Only now, I realise the legs are short? This is literally exactly what happened last time I made a post (the one with spoilers in it). So screw this, I'm gonna go back and fix it again. BRB.


...You know what? Nevermind.

One day less than a month till Christmas now. Yay.

Yeah, I think we barely celebrate anything as much as other people, but still.

Honestly, it wasn't as bad as I thought, kind of. Doggos was one of those really bland characters that could only be thought of through design and behaviour, like Phonty before he became Erie's boyfriend, as well as entities like Smile Wolf, the Priest and...uh...those other people. Hm.

Anyway, stick around for more stuff. I don't think I know what I'm doing. But it all doesn't matter anyway. We're all going to die. May as well make the most of my existence, living alongside various things, including the worst thing that could possibly exist, among other things I don't know about because there's roughly 608,300,000,000 years worth of memories to know about that I just can't possibly all take in, making the internet nearly unpatrollable. I'm just going to keep doing what I'm doing, but I want more time to do my things. Which I technically have infinite of, disregarding my determinism and uncountable lives to get through before I know to do this again. Bye...

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Nice.

say sike right now

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No, Doggos is the best. If you are referring to uh depression thing well I don't care, just Doggos is nice. Anyway, DrNose (on Discord obviously) wants 30 antibreather emojis or whatever, THEN he will release the version of the game from the "newdeathscreens" video. But it will have new hidden levels.

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Oh, okay.

Are you referring to unique emojis, leaving only 20/70 "breathing" emoji left to be usable on the server?

Oh and I'm not depressed. I just don't really care either

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Hello again. Currently designing Doggos, who for some reason, was dreaded by me the most, even though it wasn't as boring and dumb as I expected. Just realised you probably all like the doggos because they're cuddly and puppy. Anyway, since it's a day before a month before Christmas, I want to talk about something for a bit, but before we do that, I want to talk about the glitch again. You know, the one with Phonty. Anyway, I came across the glitch again and decided to delve deeper into it. Apparently, if you lure Phonty to the door at the end of the small corridor near his room, there's two great big holes leading to Unreal Engine's big black void, and he won't be able to get in. Strange, right?

So as it turns out, when he destroys the doorframe, the place where it is gets completely blocked off and nonexistent, leaving only a wooden wall in it's place. I've come up with a hypothesis as to why:

Doorframes are just holes in the walls that you can walk through. When Phonty destroys a doorframe and goes through it, the doorframe is replaced with a massive, open, broken hole, and the doorframe object and door as well as pieces of the wall go flying. When Phonty does it to this door, the wall isn't wide enough to support the existence of the broken hole, so as the doorframe vanishes, instead of the broken hole existing in it's place, it gets shifted to somewhere where it fits, which is on another wall, as you can see there, stranding Phonty on the other side, as I've managed to see by standing on the edge of the bottomless cliff into the void and peering around the corner, to see Phonty trying to reach me as close as he can since there's a barrier in the way of his closest path to me. Anyway, he's trying to get as close as he can to me, but instead of rerouting (or even just breaking through the wall), he just goes into a room adjacent to my own in a bid to decrease the distance between him and me. Idiot...


He still finds his way to you though.

It's strange. My first encounters usually make me jumpy and anxious to face them again, but now I'm just able to casually stare at Phonty and Natural Viktor head-on and walk backwards. What's with me? No wonder Viktor Strobovsky in the comments wants the floor flooded with blood, which by the way is distracting and is just, for the sake of it, redundant and forced. I mean, there's no real reason there should be blood on the floor, except if there's a leakage, and if that's implemented, mrdrnose has more lore to make up. And even though he's open to suggestions, the one thing you probably shouldn't do is try to convince him to change and add to the story and characters to your will. Hehe. Well, I also took advantage of multiple item spawns while trying to take these screenshots.
お前はもう死んでいる。


Anyway, it's almost Christmas. So if you haven't done anything yet, I have some suggestions for last year's (or New Year's) DLC. It's not gonna be much, but at least we'll have a more polished version of AEWVSCC this Christmas, if not something else you want to do.

First off, do some updates so the graphics are like in the latest version of AEWVS, make the HOME button return you to the intended main menu instead of the original one for AEWVS, and put Viktor's clothes next to the doughnuts instead of a message, I guess. There's also a glitch where if you start before the ending, 15 trees and 16 decorated trees will be finished, which can only be fixed if one of the trees comes out and gets put back in, or every spot is actually filled. You should also add a True Bad Ending for ruining the party. Here will be the changes, in order:

  • Gingerbread-Men don't spawn and Erie doesn't do any trees until you've spoken with Laura.
  • You can combine heads and bodies together, as well as consume them for stamina. (Which will be useful in a monotonous task of rushing around and decorating the school.)
  • If Laura catches you combining heads and bodies together or dropping decorations in front of the Gingerbread-Men (so they pick them up less than a second later), you will be punished.
  • If you undergo the last punishment, Laura's costume will suddenly become Mega Gardevoir (and Laura will have the original anger effects from AEWVS) and the Bad Ending screen will show Angell's stew on the table.
  • When all of the trees in the rack room are gone and Erie is sad, preventing her from spawning infinite trees, the Gingerbread-Men will focus on throwing away the decoration packs and any stray decorations on the floor, in trash bins or put up, and there will be 5 (or less) minutes until Laura realises something's up, checks the rack room and sees that there are no trees, by which point she'll automatically go to you to give you the last punishment.
  • Once all the decorations are in the cracks, a True Bad Ending will ensue, which will be a bit like the 666 ending.

I'll also attempt to anonymously post a letter to Santa asking for AEWVS to become more popular, like it used to be before it became good. It might be the most stupid idea in the history of the planet, but trust me, it's also the most revolutionary.

WAIT, NEVERMIND, I FORGOT AGAIN, SORRY -25/12/2019

Don't forget to submit a letter to Santa for AEwVS to become more popular again this year!

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Sorry. I forgot. (-.-)

Hopefully the Santa organisation takes requests from majors

Yes, I don't believe in a single Santa, but rather a fuzzy organisation of operatives acting as Santas.

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Oh, it's you.

...?

game creator I want to tell you 2 things

1) I make 2 episodes of your game check then out

1st video: 

2nd video: 

then to the 2nd episode I will make a 3rd episode I was so close to beat it but I didn't and the 4th episode I finaly beat it 5th episode 666 ending and that's all for now

2) I don't fucking know how to get the fucking "black door key" so HOW YOU SUPPOSE TO TAKE IT I HAVE LOOK EVERYWHERE I CAN'T FIND IT NO TUTORIALS HOW TO TAKE IT PLEASE TELL ME

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There's more than one level. Also, if you want mrdrnose to see things more quickly, go to Discord. See his comments below.

By the way, there aren't any exact hints as to where it is, but if you find it, it's likely you'll also come across something for an alternate ending to the Math Level. If you can open the door, it'll be in one of the lockers at the front. I just wish they stood out.

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yeah I found tutorial (do you know why I had the languege level before I beat the math??)

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Well, no...not really...

To be honest I don't really understand but whatever

this aged well! Now you are like in the top best players

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Hello I am a real fan of this game, I will like to talk with you
mrdrnose.

The game for its mechanics of horror game is perfect but it has problem,here are my suggestions for improving the game while correcting these problems :

Easter Eggs: 

It's good to add Easter Eggs but there are too many, as you can see all the popular youtubeurs make fun of Easters Eggs, that's why I propose two solutions:
 
All monsters in the Easters Eggs in a level appear in the game because the more characters there are, the better it will be like the new Balid Basic. We do not know the history of the game at the beginning, it would be good indices for each level won and Easters Eggs should supplement these indices but even more.

Random event: 

In the new version of Baldi Basic we have random events like fog, water leak, doors that prevent us from escaping etc ...

I think it would be great if you added events too, but even more scary like all the lights that go out where we hear weird noises in the dark with another monster who stalks us, a tide of blood, phantom children who appear and who murmur you can not escape, give up etc ... In short events that would disadvantage us while frightening us.

Pussy Mode Idea : 

I have nothing against the pussy mode, but I just had an illumination for its utillity in the game. The pussy mode is the original game before it becomes a horror game.

My idea is that we start the level normally, where a teacher presents the rules, everything goes well, except that the more we advance in the game, the more the teacher or we become weird (insult, threat), we see ghosts a bit like Albert who recommend that we escape as quickly as possible and the sets that change as and when. We go into another dimension, then we come back in our dimension, a little like Outlast 2. One of the events that I mentioned triggers every time we solve a notebook. After collecting all the notebooks in the original mode (pussy), the horror game begins.

For the other difficulty, I would simply put easy, normal and difficult (of course write your way). A bit like Outlast


Level generator: 

Honestly I think it would be a very good idea as Baldi Basic if you lose 3 times the generator changes, the game would be harder and cooler.

Final hunt:

For me to reinforce this dimension of horror game, the decorations should for example why not blood red or walls and the floor full of blood, and the real face of the monsters should be displayed as the face of the main that you can see all the monsters as well as Victor's true face the same for Marzia except that since it's the second level it should be even more scary like why not all the lights go out and child ghosts appear on all the walls, whispering abandoned, and full of negative things.

Best music:

I loved Victor's music for the final hunt, but the one with Marzia should be even more scary like this : (it represents the dark / predatory side of Marzia)


For Alice this one will be perfect : (it represents Alice's story and how she became so monstrous, with a mixture of despair and rage.)


Others Suggestion : 

- Remake the old intro with Viktor

- Remake the menu

- A better explanation for some objects of the game (like in Outlast or Amnesia, ex :"if you want to use the lighter press z)

- More characters like Granny who make jumpscares

- When a jumpscare hits the player his sanity decreases by half

- Make an hell difficulty , where all your answers are false. Viktor, Marzia, are very pissed, more fast, more dangerous, more creepy. With best easters eggs once finished.

- The alarm in the language level should be used, when the player has picked up 6 language notebooks in normal, 8 in easy for more stress.

- When the player has picked up 6 language notebooks in normal, 8 in easy, Marzia change her behavior, (like Viktor in the maths level,he does not make any noise, when we reach 6 or 8 maths notebooks.)So after that Marzia said something like Viktor, her behavior becomes the opposite and she can break doors. 

- When a player is in the process resolves problems in the Notebook and Granny appears, she interrupts the player, and the player has a jumpscare at the same time.

- When a player is solving a notebook, events can appear like screams, cries of children, girls, men, or monsters, children who murmur.

- Change the little pussy mode for the language level, Marzia shouldn't pursue the player.


You should honestly delete the drawings of your fans in the second level, and you put other things in the place, to see these drawings it would be enough to unlock the extra mode, after finishing the game.

Your game is fine but you should make it much more scary, if you want some examples do not hesitate to look at my latest comments, and the comments of your fans as devon who also gives good ideas.

I know you're the creator of this game, I have nothing to say about it, but these are tips from a fan, free to decide.

Mrdrnose, you should add more sentences in the language Notebook , we have the same, it becomes too easy for the players.

We should begin with sentences like that in the first and second language Notebook : 

The dog will eat his croquettes

A car is being washed by my father

To be a good student I listen

I LOVE WATERMELONS !!!!!!!

Marzia has bought all the watermelons from the store

Work in a good mood, to work better

Mr.Cleany picks up the garbage

Doggo plays with children

Granny makes a cake and eats it with his family

Viktor cuts the cake with his axe

The Rose is Red and Wonderful

etc ...

After Marzia screams (HOW DARE YOU !!!!), sentences that were simple and normal become more complex,glaucous and  the last sentences have no logic like"IRAKEKFDJOIFEJFZOHURZFPO¨DSOHFUI¨ROZRIEUHRPËOZROJ ZFP"

Sentences after the 2nd Language Notebook  : 

Mr.Cleany pick up your body again.

You can't escape Advanced Education with Viktor Strobovsky

You can't run but you can give me your legs, it's the parts i prefer

When you will die !!!

JUST DIE JUST DIE JUST DIE !!!!!!!!!!!

The principal torture to the death

The dog will eat his babies

To be a good student I died

Granny makes a cake with the organs of her family

Children are devoured by Marzia

Work in suffering, for work better

Granny plants hes pick in your skull

Doggo devours childrens

A car crushed puppies

Before Marzia kills you, she eats Watermelons

If you feel bad, kill yoursel

Viktor cuts heads with his axe

The Blood is Red ans Wonderful

The more we collect notebooks, the more the sentences become glaucous.

little like Outlast 2. One of the events that I mentioned triggers every time we solve a notebook. After collecting all the notebooks in the original mode (pussy), the horror game begins.

For the other difficulty, I would simply put easy, normal and difficult (of course write your way). A bit like Outlast

You should honestly delete the drawings of your fans in the second level, and you put other things in the place, to see these drawings it would be enough to unlock the extra mode, after finishing the first level for an example.

Your game is fine but you should make it much more scary, if you want some examples do not hesitate to look at my latest comments, and the comments of your fans as devon who also gives good ideas.

I know you're the creator of this game, I have nothing to say about it, but these are tips from a fan, free to decide.

What do you think ?

Good luck and I hope this game will have the glory it deserves

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Hello. I am a big fan of this game, and I would like to talk to you, mrdrnose.

The horror game for its mechanics of horror is perfect, but it has a few problems; here are my suggestions for improving the game while correcting these problems:

Easter Eggs: 

It's good to add Easter Eggs, but there are too many (1): as you can see, all the popular YouTubers make fun of Easter Eggs. That's why I propose two solutions: All monsters in the Easters Eggs in a level appear in the game because the more characters there are, the better it will be, like the new BBIEAL. We do not know the history of the game at the beginning, so it would be a good incentive for each level beaten, and the Easter Eggs should supplement these incentives even more. (2)

Random Events:

In the new version of BBIEAL, we have random events like fog, leakage, doors that prevent us from escaping, etc.

I think it would be great if you added events too (3), but even more scary, like all the lights going out where we hear weird noises in the dark with another monster who stalks us, a tide of blood, phantom children who appear and murmur "you cannot escape", "give up", etc. in short events that would advantage/disadvantage us while frightening us. (4)

Lil Puss Mode Idea:

I have nothing against the Lil Puss mode, but I just had an illumination for its utillity in the game. The Lil Puss mode is the original game before it becomes a horror game. (5)

My idea is that we start the level normally, where a teacher presents the rules and everything goes well, except that the more we advance in the game, the more the teacher or we become weird (insult, threat), we see ghosts a bit like Albert who recommend that we escape as quickly as possible and the sets that change as and when. We go into another dimension, then we come back in our dimension, a bit like in Outlast 2. One of the aforementioned events triggers every time we solve a notebook. After collecting all the notebooks in the original mode (Lil Puss mode), the horror game begins.

For the other difficulties, I would simply have easy, normal and difficult (of course written your way); a bit like Outlast.

Level Generator: 

Honestly I think it would be a very good idea as BBIEAL if you lose 3 times, the generator changes, and the game would be harder and cooler. (6)

Final Chase:

For me to reinforce this dimension of horror game, the decorations should have various things - for example, why not have blood red walls, or the walls and floor full of blood? And the real face of the monsters should be displayed as the face of the main that you can see all the monsters as well as Victor's true face (7) - the same for Marzia, except that since it's the second level, it should be even more scary - like, why not have all the lights go out and child ghosts appear on all the walls, whispering various, negative things?

Best music:

I loved Viktor's music for the final chase, but the one with Marzia should be even more scary like this (it represents the dark/predatory side of Marzia). See original post. (8)

For Alice, this one will be perfect (it represents Alice's story and how she became so monstrous, with a mixture of despair and rage.) See original post. (9)

Other Suggestions:

-Remake the old intro with Viktor (10)

-Remake the menu (11)

-Give a better explanation for items (like in Outlast or Amnesia, e.g. "Press Z to use the lighter") (12)

-Have more characters like Granny who make jumpscares (13)

-When a jumpscare hits the player, his sanity decreases by half (14)

-Make a Hell mode, where all problems are unsolvable, and the teachers are more angry, fast, dangerous and creepy, which will have the best easter eggs (15)

-The alarm clock in the Language Level should be restored when the player has picked up a certain number of language notebooks (according to the mode).

-When the player has picked up a certain number of notebooks, Marzia should change her behaviour (like Viktor in the Math Level, where he walks silently). After Marzia says something like Viktor, her behaviour will become the opposite and she will break doors. (16)

-When the player is solving a notebook and Granny appears, she should interrupt the player, giving them a jumpscare as normal, but forcing them to return the notebook and start again.

-While the player is solving a notebook, auditory events should occur, like screams, cries and murmurs of children, men, women and/or monsters.

-Make it so that Marzia doesn't pursue the player in Lil Puss Mode. (17)

You should honestly delete the fanart in the language level and put other things in place. To see these paintings, it should be enough to unlock the extra mode, after finishing the game. (18)

Also, mrdrnose, you should add more sentences in the language notebooks. We keep having the same ones, which makes it quite easy for the players. (See the original post for more info.) After Marzia screams ("HOW DARE YOU!"), sentences that were simple and normal become more complex and glaucous, and the last sentences have no logic like "IRAKEKFDJOIFEJFZOHURZFPO¨DSOHFUI¨ROZRIEUHRPËOZROJ ZFP" (19). The more we collect notebooks, the more the sentences become glaucous.

Your game is fine, but you should make it much more scary. If you want some examples, do not hesitate to look at my latest comments, and the comments of your fans such as Devon who also give good ideas. (20)

I know you're the creator of this game, so I have nothing to really say about it, but these are tips from a fan, so feel free to decide.

What do you think?

Good luck and I hope this game will have the glory it deserves.




1: It depends. All the existing Easter Eggs right now revolve around the lore, except for the meme at the end of the long hallway in the Language Level, as well as the cancerous green book of internet memes on the top storey and also the nuclear pigeon, which makes the History Level free to explore as it's being developed. I do agree that there's a bit many (the lower the level, the more there are - seriously, see for yourself), but yeah. I won't spoil them all here, but since you look like a loyal fan, I will upon request, on the condition that you agree to ruin the surprises for yourself, which some people don't like since it spoils the experience for them (hence, spoilers). The hidden buttons added in Version 0.1.3b are a bit mundane though.

2: The whole idea is that each level will have deep secrets to be explored and found. I forgot what I was going to say next, but I guess I just wanted to point that out.

3: That's okay, but remember what he spammed on the front page once, which is now only said four times: "this is not a fan game". It actually is, but it's not meant to directly be like BBIEAL anymore. While it will retain core similarities in elements, and we do want BBIEAL and AEWVS to come closer together (in terms of communities and knowledge), AEWVS will seldom use BBIEAL's elements simply for that purpose again.

4: I feel like having the ghost children appearing and whispering things is a bit obvious. We're not really supposed to know what's going on until we explore, and I think the shadow ghosts in the caféteria were enough. And having a tide of blood just for the heck of it is a bit redundant and forced, and retracts from the already-established lore. Besides, we already have a few random events, despite them being inconsequential, like a random murmur here or there, or an alarm announcing warnings to the Head Teacher. I would also consider Granny's appearance one of them, too. When you think about it, it is.

5: It's supposed to be a joke mode for, as it says, little pusses. The idea of getting used to the map and the problems isn't really going to be affected, but yeah. I don't even think it was really a school before it was repurposed as one, since there are way too many classrooms and confusing layouts, and not enough teachers.

6: See 3. I think a random generator would be best for a limited section of the Geometry Level, or Mathematics #2. Not only would everything be difficult to program and fit in (considering how connected everything is), but AEWVS is about strategy, which would be more difficult to implement if people only had three chances to get a working strategy into place and succeed before having to start all over again.

7: Viktor's mask is his true face - he's a tarwill, after all. See AEWVS: Christmas Curse for more info, or find a way to do something with the chalk.

8: In case you didn't notice, the chase music for Marzia is now Wrillez Basics: Discordia. Tell us what you think of that one first, since it's basically an extension of the Language Level theme.

9: As it turns out, Alice is a human being possessed by an entity called Tiara, which gives her various transformations. So she only has one true personality, which recently has become quite friendly and positive. I'm still willing to bet on the loneliness and isolation of Alice and Tiara though. Also, mrdrnose has said on Discord that Baldi, Viktor and Marzia all had chase sequences, and he wants something different for Alice.

10: Yeah, that was pretty helpful, albeit a bit spoiling (though every decent game needs a content warning, so it's okay).

11: He's doing that, even though it's still not done. See the test menu at the bottom of the screen. It's planned to be about some computer monitor.

12: It would be nice to allow Angell to examine and describe various items, which I'm thinking about doing. But remember, AEWVS is about creativity, problem-solving and experimentation - which is the key to learning all of it's secrets, so keep that in mind.

13: If they're just like Granny, they'd be a bit redundant. At least now, her jumpscare gives effects. Your sanity now lowers when she jumpscares you, which recently was updated to alter your vision and control your actions at lower levels. Other than that, characters with jumpscares are okay. I do notice how characters like Doggos and Phonty kind of don't though - they just behave threateningly and make you drop and roll onto the floor by killing you in various ways.

14: Granny already does that, but that doesn't really sound like a bad idea. Also, Angell is a girl. Who I didn't even realise was until her gender and name were confirmed.

15: Have you played Brainiac Mode yet? There are also slight peaks and differences in the modes, so what would Hell mode be like?

16: In Brainiac Mode, Marzia busts down doors instead of merely opening them once she manages to get through. I imagine that would be the change, which would apply to every mode instead of just Brainiac, at different numbers of notebooks. But she's quite fast, which would be a bit problematic in some cases.

17: Not only would her appearance arise a lot of problems, since she doesn't have hands and needs to high kick doors open with her foot if she doesn't just bust them down like in the final chase, but she knows she's in Lil Puss mode (her lines change), and isn't co-operating, which is why the language notebooks allow wrong answers to be registered, unlike the math notebooks. Also on every tenth language notebook she insults you (in every mode).

18: Spoilers. But see the hidden gallery that's pretty much just a hall of fanart along with various helpful items which the staff don't know how to get in. That's a good idea though, apart from the question of what to put in the room with Phonty instead. I've considered that for secret paintings, which should only be accessible once you know the secrets. Like, if you enter teleporting doors in the Math Level with a Rusty Fork, maybe you'd see something like that.

19: I know mrdrnose has various things he needs to work on in English rather than Russian, but Marzia is a Grammar Nazi - but instead in Soviet Russia.

20: See Discord. A massive chat room with history dating back to over a year where they just be themselves. Weirdos...lol... Really though, you should catch up. I think I even might, just out of curiosity.

You really should go to Discord and catch up with everyone - I know I haven't - or at least Twitter, YouTube and Itch (see the newest version of AEWVS and also the Christmas Curse DLC if you haven't seen it yet). By the way, to everyone wanting it to be rid of memes, I say, don't bother. The Christmas Curse DLC is confirmed canon by mrdrnose, despite going against many of the things already established in AEWVS (like how they're celebrating Christ) and being much more like a costume party in terms of costumes. If Viktor likes memes, let him - this game is about him, after all, and it's not always about memes.




Welp, I hope this helped everyone. Feel free to read my feedback on your feedback, and just keep going on what you're doing. Bye!

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Hi thanks, i can' t access the discord link, but yeah it won't be like Baldi but evenements and level generator without 3 lifes will be cool.

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Hello again. Welp, make yourself comfortable here then. The community's WAY more active there though, so...yeah.

Anyway, did you mean events? I think you did. And what do you mean about the "level generator without 3 lives"?

I mean events like Baldi but a lot different and scary and like you said about the level generator 3 lives will be short this is why maybe 10 or none live. 

How can i join your discord, are you the dev too ?

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Still...having randomly generated rooms with various chances of improperly generated sections and flukes or bugs detracts from the true strategy of the game, as well as Angell's ability to go back and jump around in time.

Well...Try this link https://discord.gg/Ua3TDkx or go and ask AbsolLover666 or MrDrNose if that doesn't work. (Remember, they're on various social media, so check out the links in the description above if Itch doesn't suffice.) Also, I'm not the developer. Obviously. And it was my idea to give everyone better chatting capabilities with Discord so the community can keep itself together, but AbsolLover666 started it, and I left it, rejoined it and left it again since everyone was being a bit much. Now I am forever locked out of it unless I go on someone else's device and start another account there - and if I do, I won't say anything at all. I'll just observe. Oh well, I wasted so much time there anyways - but then again, I'm just wasting time on Reddit because I'm bored. Even then, I could always just give up and do my jobs. People really need to return to r/strobovski, by the way. Anyway, I'm not the developer. But I might be for something else I'm going to do. Just you all wait.

Still gonna pretty much act like I'm in Discord, even if I'm not. As you can tell by my spammy comments and activity on the homepage.

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Hello again. Try the new Discord invite link now. He fixed it. ...I think. Imma go check.

...Yep, I think the link's definitely changed. Try now.

Did...did it work?

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Great comment, great suggestion, I have to say the random event thing, it isn't needed and needed to be called, or exactly like in Baldi. If you mean scary stuff happening randomly, yes, like a chance that the ceiling would fall down and you would have to jump over it, randomly! Like Grandma, but Grandma's minor. Puss mode, I like the idea! Final Chase, yes, the music sounds like something that would fit to Corvus, I don't know if it fits but it's good. Alice music.... Nah, it sounds like it's obviously ripped from some japanese games. I actually agree about removing the fanart from language! And get new sentences. This "Don't trust to him! She will find her" over and over stuff, it's just weird to any players. Hell mode, yes, great idea. Cries while solving the notebooks, yes.

or should i say hell mode hell yeah

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